Feedback from the rough cut (production)

 Feedback from our audience.

Feed back from our teachers.:-

• Move the sequence with the man to the end. Which will help with our continuity issue
Slow down the opening shots of the sky and intro some transitions.
Take out the walking around the corner shot
Improve the interaction scene with a cut to sylvda singing so the sequence doesn't drag
Add animation to the time lapse bits.