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Monday 1 November 2010

Review of research & planning activity blogs

Hello Group 17

I'm a little disappointed by how little there is in your blogs. Your pitch is very detailed and you have put a lot of effort into it but the quality of your blogs doesn't support this. As a group, you have a lot of work to catch up with in order to get your blogs up to date. Remember that your blog is worth 20 marks so it needs time spending on it.  Please see the table below to help you identify what's missing from your blogs.


GROUP 17
General Comments
·         Disappointingly behind – there is a lot to do and some of the posts lack detail. A lot of work has gone into the pitch but the blog needs more effort put into it.
·         A lot of work to catch up with
Whole group needs to include the following:
·         Letter to record company requesting copyright clearance
·         Digital storyboard
·         Letter from record company confirming copyright clearance
·         Propp – overview of theory & application to a pop video (this is an individual task but none of you have attempted it)
Filipa
·         Shortlist of potential songs
·         Summary of Goodwin’s main points
Holly
·         Shortlist of potential songs (what is there is no where near detailed enough)
·         Review of previous student video
·         Final song choice with link to video & explanation for use
Niquita
·         Review of previous student video
·         Final song choice with link to video & explanation for use
Sylvda
·         Shortlist of potential songs
·         Final song choice with link to video & explanation for use

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