Feedback from the rough cut

As a group i think, that we did very well for our rough cut. However, we had a discussion amongst ourselves and our teacher. We came up with a list of things we need to work on.

1) Continuity - place the scene where sylvda bumps into the guy at the end.
2) Slow down the opening, so that we can see the transition
3) Add the animation to the time lapse
4) Take out the scene, where she walks around the corner.
5) Cut down the interaction scene, as it was too long.