Finishing our rough cut was a good process to feeling happy on how much we had completed. Here and now i must thank Holly on amazing work she put into the editing, since she knew the most about it she was able to be the technological bunny of the group. When we had a finished rough cut, we had to present it to the class and the teacher. We received mixed feedback on which we proceeded to improve on.
Some of the feedback included:
- To swap around scenes so that the story made more sense to the viewer
- To add more blue sky and slow down the scenes at the beginning and also to introduce some cross dissolves to the rest of the opening of the video
- A scene where Coco walks past and the shot is taken from a high angle view, the teacher did not enjoy this and suggested we improve this
Just in time we did have time to complete this to good levels, a lot of effort was put in to turn around the whole video so that the story made more sense to an audience. This was something we learnt, although it made sense to us it didn't necessarily mean an outsider would understand, we did because we had to created the idea. This teaches us to be more clear and think in a way in a more simple frame of mind.
The class feedback was generally positive, their major point was also the story needing to be turned around because even they couldn't understand it.
Positive feedback from both teacher and class, this included the quick sharp editing, the particular scene of doors changing colours, the creative interaction between Coco and Mr Blue Sky.
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